Comments on: MILKY JAY! https://www.elisabblah.com/2014/12/10/milky-jay/ Tue, 16 Dec 2014 16:28:52 +0000 hourly 1 By: manyedokua https://www.elisabblah.com/2014/12/10/milky-jay/#comment-220 Tue, 16 Dec 2014 16:28:52 +0000 http://elitellstales.wordpress.com/?p=2#comment-220 Loved the story and the lesson it conveyed. Amazing talent

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By: KenteGB https://www.elisabblah.com/2014/12/10/milky-jay/#comment-219 Sat, 13 Dec 2014 08:53:42 +0000 http://elitellstales.wordpress.com/?p=2#comment-219 In reply to elisabblah.

Pleasure reading your work.

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By: Andy https://www.elisabblah.com/2014/12/10/milky-jay/#comment-218 Fri, 12 Dec 2014 21:37:34 +0000 http://elitellstales.wordpress.com/?p=2#comment-218 Wow

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By: elisabblah https://www.elisabblah.com/2014/12/10/milky-jay/#comment-217 Fri, 12 Dec 2014 08:55:45 +0000 http://elitellstales.wordpress.com/?p=2#comment-217 In reply to elisabblah.

Exaxtly!!! Anthony would have lashed out strongly at his son had he confessed that someone else taught him how to smoke. Parents forget how influential they are in the lives of their kids and always blame the negative behaviours these kids pick up on the times and seasons we are in and also
on the negative peer company their kids keep. Thanks for readn n sharing ur view.

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By: elisabblah https://www.elisabblah.com/2014/12/10/milky-jay/#comment-216 Fri, 12 Dec 2014 08:49:59 +0000 http://elitellstales.wordpress.com/?p=2#comment-216 In reply to KenteGB.

I hope so too. Asabea is too soft. Hehehehe thanks boss for reading. Your comments are very much appreciated.

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By: korankyenuamaheric https://www.elisabblah.com/2014/12/10/milky-jay/#comment-215 Fri, 12 Dec 2014 07:49:39 +0000 http://elitellstales.wordpress.com/?p=2#comment-215 *Sighs for 2,000 minutes*
The imagism in the diction are so clear that I feel the incidents happening right in front of my eyes. Hmmmm…parenting! If parenting were to be taught and a degree awarded to it, many bookworm people will acquire it and yet fail to deliver. It’s a natural gift by God, but to be successful at it is dependent on prayers and our actions. I believe if Selorm had said a different person taught him smoking, his dad would have been very radical at him. The guilty conscience pricking him was just enough punishment. A great lesson learnt! We should all be circumspect with our actions when we get there.
Writing is an art, and indeed you are an artist! Keep it up!

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By: KenteGB https://www.elisabblah.com/2014/12/10/milky-jay/#comment-214 Fri, 12 Dec 2014 05:07:24 +0000 http://elitellstales.wordpress.com/?p=2#comment-214 I hope Selorm will think about the sadness he has caused the father in the night and apologize as an African son will do in the morning. Praying Anthony wouldn’t die in his sleep so he can forgive himself in the morning. Asabea should try and be a little strong woman and do away with tears so she can support the husband and the kind. Homse and Edinam should be ready for the vacation at Shai Hills. The family will have a great time there and things will be back to normal. It will be a place of memories.
Moral lessons: My actions may affect others positively or negatively so I should be careful on what I do. It doesn’t make me less man when I cry or share my problems.
Great work!

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